Jim Murray

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Storytelling Vs Lesson Teaching Courtesy Of Bob Dylan (And Me)

Storytelling Vs Lesson Teaching Courtesy Of Bob Dylan (And Me)

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Very early on in my life I discovered that I had an instinctual understanding that one of the most important things in life was maintaining a balance.
A balance between what you want and what you need. A balance between generosity and selfishness. A balance between work and play…etc.
I have spent a number of years working on maintaining this balance. And it’s turned out pretty well. I have an excellent balance between work and play. I have a great family life. And I have several very good friends with whom I can discuss how to put the entire world in a state of balance.
I have had a good balance between ups and downs. Never too far down to cause a lot of worry, hardly ever too far up to cause anxiety and extreme stress.
This balance is also a very important part of my writing.

The Balance I Try To Maintain In My Writing

To me, and I emphasize that this is my personal opinion based on the types of writing I do, maintaining balance as a writer means understanding the difference between telling a story and teaching a lesson.
It means knowing how to use storytelling to balance your narrative and exemplify the lesson your are trying to impart.
And it also means being able to discern which situations would benefit from storytelling and which would not.

What’s Bob Dylan Got To Do With This?

I learned a lot about this balance between storytelling and lesson teaching from listening to the music of Bob Dylan. who is arguably the greatest storyteller of my generation.
If you listen to Bob Dylan’s early work, he is often pointing out injustices and inequities in society and the world. But he most often does it as an observer and not a participant.

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He’s telling stories and not overtly teaching lessons. He wants the lesson to be something you discover and teach yourself.
This is the best of both worlds in writing and one of the key aspects of Bob Dylan’s real genius.
In a lot of his work, Bob describes the situation, then he describes what’s wrong with the situation. But he seldom does he complete the circle of reasoning to get to “And here’s what I’m going to or would do about It.”
He would much rather have you figure that out.
I can’t overstate how much I admire that quality and wish I could do it as well as him.
A Little Story

One of his songs that most exemplifies this style is The Lonesome Death Of Hattie Carroll, which tells the story of a black woman, a barmaid, who was killed by a rich white guy in Baltimore in 1963.
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/The-Lonesome-Death-of-Hattie-Carroll-lyrics-Bob-Dylan/DA27DBAD96636E8B482569690027CDA8

In this song, Bob splendidly uses the power of his words to tell the story of the murder and the ultimate injustice that followed without ever coming out and condemning it personally.
This, in turn, actually gives the listener permission to draw their own conclusion and feel a deeper passion for the situation.

A Little Lesson

Being fortunate enough to have discovered that early on, when my own passion for writing was all shiny and new, was one of the things that shaped my approach to writing and a bit of my style as well.
A lot of people don’t write this way. And I don’t always write this way myself. After all I’m an advertising guy, and as such, am all about the persuasion, which usually falls under the category of teaching lessons.
A lot of people who are blogging, but are not professional writers, write from a very personal perspective. Often times this is designed to sway you over to a cause or a way of thinking and not so much about the telling of stories.
In point of fact, a relatively small percentage of bloggers actually use storytelling in any sort of effective way.

What Does Storytelling Actually Mean?

Well, obviously it means different things to different people. For me it’s pretty straightforward.
When I am having conversations with people about what they should do with their branding or their communications, I will often use examples (aka stories) of other situations I have been in or know about to illustrate how a challenge similar to theirs was met and successfully managed.
This is very common in my business and it is the essence of storytelling for me – quite simply using a real example that you know about or have experienced to make it easier and more appealing for the people reading whatever you are writing.
We all have these kinds of stories in our heads. But many people don’t really bother to use them.
Maybe they feel that they just won’t do the story justice by trying to write it. Maybe they get carried away with the lesson teaching and forget about it.
Whatever the reason, it’s something to think about, and maybe something that will be worth incorporating into your own work.

The Learning

• No single rule or finite set of rules about writing is ever going to work in every situation.
• Creating and incorporating the kind of storytelling that works for you will help you find the balance that can strengthen your posts and draw more people into them.
Post Script: I had a lot of trouble writing this post. I was trying hard to simplify what is, at the best of times, a complex mental process. Also I have never really written about this aspect of writing before, so I hope the points I was trying to make actually came across with some clarity.

393418aa.jpgIf you have a marketing or communications challenge you would like to discuss, (no obligation) there are three ways you can contact me.

Direct Line: 416 463-3475 • Email: onandup3@gmail.com  •  Skype: jimbobmur61

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Comments

Randy Keho

7 years ago #5

#4
Actually, I'm with two buddies at a Hooter's on the bay. I have an issue with golf. I kept falling off the ball washer.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #4

#2
Hope you're watching the British Open with your beer, This is some of the most amazing golf I have ever seen.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #3

#1
Thanks Gert Scholtz. I'd say you were learning very well.

Randy Keho

7 years ago #2

I'd say you came across loud and clear, Jim Murray Now, back to my beer.

Gert Scholtz

7 years ago #1

Jim Murray Another great piece Jim. To me the trickiest part of storytelling is as you say of Dylan: "But he seldom does he complete the circle of reasoning to get to “And here’s what I’m going to or would do about It.” IMO (first time I have used this acronym!) Putting enough in the story to prompt the reader to their own inferences is what great stories are about. I am learning this every day through great writers such as yourself.

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