Jim Murray

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The Writer’s Voice. A Work In Progress

The Writer’s Voice. A Work In Progress

SO MUCH TO DO

So much to do...so little time
So many mountains I've yet to climb
So many ups...so many downs
So many people ...so little common ground

So many words pass through my pen
So much starting all over again
In a world where nothing ever seems real
It’s hard to touch what you truly feel

So many children
See how they grow
So much to tell them
Before they know
How to believe in a
World gone wrong
How to sing out
When they feel their own song
How to hold onto love
When all the love seems dead and gone

So many people I've yet to know
So many heartaches yet to lay me low
So much confusion to suffer through

So many broken dreams before one comes true

So much to do in a single life
Too little harmony and too much strife
All we can do is fight the good fight
All we can do is hold onto each other tonight

So many lovers
How they come and go
You think you're close to them
But do you ever know
Just what secrets
They have to hide
How much love
They have been denied
Just what they might
Really be feeling inside

So much to do...so little time
So many mountains I've yet to climb
So much to do...so much to say
I've got the fever and it won't go away

Firm Pluss

The older you get the faster the time goes. It sounds like a lamentation, but if you get to a certain age like me and you’re still quite healthy, you start to look at life a little differently.
 

The Lucky Bastard Principle
 

You start to think, man, I’m one lucky bastard, especially when you consider all the great creative people lately who are checking out in their late 60s and early 70s.
Since writers tend to reflect a lot of the stuff that collides with them daily the results can sometimes lead readers to believe that the writer is perhaps a little depressed. That sort of happened to me last year.

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Let me answer that by saying that I have no idea what depression feels like. But I do know a lot about what I feel inside my head. Because that’s where my office is.
What people tend to think of as depression in other people, may very well not be that. First of all when people are truly depressed, it’s quite unlikely that you would hear from them at all.

Also, depression is a very serious mental health issue and a physical ailment. But it’s one of those words that people use instead of asking someone if they are pissed off or lacking iron in their system or some other minor condition.

There are a lot of words like that: amazing, radical, awesome, excellent, dynamic etc. These words have been overused to the point where their meaning is lost.
Trust me, when I tell you that the last thing I would be doing if I were depressed is sitting here explaining the misuse of the word.

Balls To The Wall
 

I have always been pretty hard core in my personal writing. No matter what I was writing: lyrics, short stories, poetry, screenplays or blogs, a lot of it is pretty blunt. But that’s my choice. It is the voice I feel most comfortable speaking in.
 

Voice Modification
 

Over the past several months, I have started to notice my voice changing. And like anyone who is confronted with change, be it internally generated or externally directed, there is a tendency to rebel and rage against the change, even though you are in charge of it, and going with the flow would be much easier. But that is not the case here. In fact it’s quite the opposite.
 

BeBee…A Change For The Better
 

Moving my blogging headquarters to beBee and leaving LinkedIn Pulse behind has been a real change for the better for me, because for most of 2015 a lot of the stuff I was doing was kinda bitter and twisted and that really was dictated by the repressed environment in which I (and a lot of other writers) found myself in.

Today, this change is clear in my head. And I am pretty much all about working my new voice and stretching ti this way and that to see what happens.
 

Blogging Is Fun Again
 

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I’ve been writing for more than 50 years. And writing professionally for about 40. During the course of that time, writing was never difficult for me.

I suppose you could say I'm very lucky, in that I never really had to suffer for it. I’ve never had writer’s block. It has never caused me to become ill in any way. Writing has been basically a companion for me. Something that has kept me out of a lot of shit I could have gotten into otherwise.

And this is not the first change that I have gone through. There was one other major change. And that was the one that took me from a mad scribbler of unfocused blank verse to a writer of much more structured pieces, which, in turn gave me the discipline to write short stories, screenplays, even a bad novel.

But this change is different. It’s much less jarring. And what makes it that way is the environment I have managed to create here on beBee combined with all the support that writers get here in general.

’m privileged to know quite a few good writers here on beBee and on LinkedIn. They have influenced me, entertained me and moved me in countless ways.
@Phil Friedman, @Kevin Pashuk, @Don Kerr, @Jesse Kaelis, @John White, @Matt Sweetwood, @Donna-Luisa Eversley, @Chas Wyatt, even @Randy Keho, Ian Mirlin, Bob Hoffman, @Graham Edwards, @Renee Cormier to name but a few.

For writers, the people you read are as much a part of who you are as a writer as the writing you do. And if course, the voice you speak to the world in.

One of the other changes I am going though is leaving the city I have called home since 1969. Hopefully, it provides me with lots of new stimulation in a less crowded and noisy environment. I’m not sure it will change my voice. But I’m also not sure it won’t. We’ll just have to wait and see.
 

As usual, likes, comments and shared are all gratefully accepted and appreciated.
 

 


 

 

 

 

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Comments

Fay Vietmeier

2 years ago #23

💜😇 @Jim Murray

 

As I joined beBee in 2019 - missed this superb post .. wonderful.

Aren't we all just that “a work in progess” 

I'm inclined to agree with @David Navarro López that depression might be for many the lack of desire to “work on themselves”

Everyone has “issues”

Not everyone has the desire, courage or capacity to look within 

I LOVE this poem & share this excellent post 

Jim Murray

7 years ago #22

#23
Thanks David. We're very excited about this move and hoping to get it done before our hard core winter sets in. Time will probably continue to move swiftly, but I intend to make the most of it. Fortunately my family is of the hardy Scottish Highland breed, who live a long time. Let's hope I benefit from that.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #21

#25
I have published a lot of advice posts, Amber. I got a bit distracted this year with trying to save America from itself. But I have slacked off and gone back into something more useful. You can access these posts at https://www.bebee.com/publisher/@jim-murray

Jim Murray

7 years ago #20

#24
I am looking forward to moving We talk about it a lot. It's just time. My sister in law remarked that we would enjoy the slower pace of life. I think she's right. But, I'll tell you right now, I have absolutely no intention of 'mellowing out'.

David Navarro López

7 years ago #19

I like your buzz from A to Z, and feel identified with it. When you say "The older you get the faster the time goes" I know exactly the feeling, and believe me, since some time I am wondering why. Maybe is because with the age comes experience, and you learn there are so many things you still did not do and want to do, so time seems to shrink. Concerning to depression, I admit I never had the feeling I had this illness, so I conclude I have never been, even if many of my surroundings thought I had reasons for it. I don't deny depression exists, is a real illness, but I seriously doubt there are so many depressive people around. I suspect that some use the term depression as an excuse not to work hard on themselves, although this is something I've always kept in my thoughts. Much of luck with your change of residence. I have done such a change recently (From Spain to Germany), and although I was afraid at first term I was not going to adapt, well, here I am, alive and kickin'. Above all, I am happy you chosen Bebee as you HQ, so I can enjoy your lines.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #18

#21
Thanks . Bard....I like it.

Mohammed Abdul Jawad

7 years ago #17

Aha....You have treasured five decades of scribbling experience and that's so great and good. Yea...energize yourself for some soothing lyrics and let beBee bees hear to hum with pleasant passions. With mature mind and hoary hair, pen down some sensible stories or sweeten your posts with some humor coupled with blunt and beauteous remarks. Like a bard, keep versifying lines to provoke passions and beckon buzzing bees. Go ahead for satirical synopses or blogs in brevity. ..but keep fueling beBee with your frolicking feelings, inspiring insights and words of wisdom. :)

Lisa Gallagher

7 years ago #16

#19
Always nice to have time to get some necessary things done before you move in!!

Jim Murray

7 years ago #15

#18
Thanks Lisa. We are fortunate in that we will have about 10 days from the time we take possession till the time we move in. So we can get a lot of the flooring work done without any hassle.

Lisa Gallagher

7 years ago #14

Best of luck to you in your new home Jim Murray! You described the differences between real depression and a temporary feeling of depression well. When a person is depressed they literally feel sick, can't focus, can't write and don't feel up to talking on the phone. You may have a gruff edge to you when it comes to writing but I enjoy what you write and your style. I hope your move leaves you with a new sense of wonderment. We moved to Pa in 92 from Ohio, my entire family still back in Ohio, my lifetime friends but I felt a sense of renewal and looked at it like we were on a very long, extended vacation.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #13

#14
Wayne Yoshida...thanks, man. I think we all are changing constantly sometimes in little ways, sometime in big ways. The big change for me was actually leaving Linkedin Pulse and discovering that could get back to writing about the stuff I used to write about before I became part of the protest movement over there. I have written a few posts about this.

Phil Friedman

7 years ago #12

#12
Don, I believe the fact is a great many more people suffer from depression at one or more times during their lives than we know. In my experience, not all depression rises (or lowers) to the level of deep clinical depression. And some of us experience highs and lows, lasting weeks to months, many times during our lives. But I think Jim is right that depression is often transparent to all save the victim. Not saying that is the way it should be, just that it is the way it is. Cheers!

Wayne Yoshida

7 years ago #11

Jim, good to hear of your metamorphosis and the before vs the after - er - the new Jim. I suspect the old Jim will come out every now and then. I was about to say "don't change" but that's not my place to suggest that. Either way, I appreciate and always look forward to your posts, rants and Buzzes.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #10

#12
You've got a point Don Kerr. I guess what I was getting at is that depression, in a lot of instances, is invisible to other people. You just kind of fall off the world somehow. Not everybody, but I have known people like that and that's my frame of reference.

don kerr

7 years ago #9

I have but one quibble with you Jim Murray and it is this: "First of all when people are truly depressed, it’s quite unlikely that you would hear from them at all." Therein lies part of the problem with our societal approach to mental illness. Yes, at times we who live with depression are rendered virtually mute. Mercifully for me that is extremely rare. However, forever those of us living with depression have been guided by commerce, society, education, good manners and social norms to keep it under our hats - so to speak. I love everything about this piece you've written and I so appreciate being included in your list of writers worth reading. Your respect means a great deal to me and I call you friend. Sharing.

Milos Djukic

7 years ago #8

Thank you for everything Jim Murray, especially writing.

Graham🐝 Edwards

7 years ago #7

You keep writing Jim Murray and I will keep reading! As an aside, your inspiration is greatly appreciated.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #6

Thanks to everybody who commented Phil Friedman. I just wrote an email to my sister that we will be moved in before Christmas. Probably on the 15th or 16th.

Jim Murray

7 years ago #5

#7
Thanks @Ashesh Datta. As I said I do now have depression. But there is a certain amount of oppression that comes frim feuding with your environment. Admittedly I have done that and come though it in good shape. Now I am fighting with cardboard and realizing I have way too many books.

Phil Friedman

7 years ago #4

Yea, Jimbo, you may have these guys fooled. But I know deep with your psyche beats the stout heart of an authentic curmudgeon. And if anyone doubts that, they should read the upcoming installment #22 of HE SAID HE SAID. See you there, my friend. Cheers and best wishes for a health, happy and long life in your new place.

Paul Walters

7 years ago #3

Jim Murray comment on this buzz.said it all really. After being in a similar position, I found the 'big' move to Bali daunting but it was the best thing I ever did. Ditto with joining beBEE , it kindd of felt liberating. Now could you help me adjust these new wings as I have to buzz off and collect pollen( Actually bees don't collect pollen they collect nectar)

Kevin Pashuk

7 years ago #2

I can't wait to read what you come up with after hanging out at the antique carousel in St. Catherines... It's a great place to have your muse activated.

Pascal Derrien

7 years ago #1

I am glad you managed to turn the mood around, it is great having you (back) :-)

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