Robert Cormack

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Is Brilliance Dead?

Is Brilliance Dead?

WE'VE BEEN THERE FOR YOU DURING THE GOOD TIMES.

THANK YOU FOR BEING THERE FOR US NOW.

Maybe it’s time to kill brilliance and start again—if there’s anything left to kill.


Being brilliant is no great feat if you respect nothing.” Goethe

Maybe this isn’t the time or place to vent, but I will, anyway. Yesterday, someone posted the above ad, calling it “brilliant.” It was done by R&R Partners and commissioned by the Las Vegas Convention and Visitors Authority.

R&R Partners was responsible for “What Happens In Vegas Stays In Vegas,” one of the most overused lines to come out of Sin City. In fact, people have been saying it since the 50s, usually after doing something they shouldn’t have. So it was neither new nor original. In other words, the line was a gift.

Nothing wrong with that. David Ogilvy’s most famous line: “At 60 miles an hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock” was lifted from a car magazine review.

When do you stop promoting yourself and simply be a good person or organization?

So what does R&R Partners do when they don’t have a “gift,” especially after the deadliest shooting in modern U.S. history (note the use of “modern” since the Wounded Knee Massacre involved more than 200 Native Americans).

Obviously, they were faced with a difficult scenario (58 dead, 458 wounded). At the same time, they had to answer an even more difficult question: When do you stop promoting yourself and simply be a good person or organization?

I guess R&R Partners figured they could do both. First, they needed a great hashtag. Nothing wrong with #VegasStrong. That’s what America needs after the worst mass shooting in modern history.

Now comes the main message. What can you say that comforts people while reminding them why they come to Vegas in the first place? So R&R Partners figured they’d start out with the latter: “We’ve been there for you during the good times.” At least we know who’s talking, right?

I would also suggest this should be studied by every advertising class in the country. Let’s call it “Crisis Advertising.”

Trouble is, isn’t that promoting yourself in the aftermath of a debacle? I’m sure they thought of that. Okay, follow it up with: “Thank you for being there for us now.” Nice thought, although not entirely accurate. People hightailed it out of Vegas. It may represent the greatest one-day exodus in U.S. history.

My point is, given the circumstances, did R&R Partners fall back on typical advertising technique? Do you promote yourselves even in the dark days of a bloodbath? I’d suggest you don’t. I would also suggest this should be studied by every advertising class in the country. Let’s call it “Crisis Advertising.”

First, this isn’t about you (meaning The Las Vegas Convention and Visitors Authority). Forget who you are. Stick to what this crisis represents. Are people terrified by what can happen in their own country? Of course. Should they be angry? Yes, they should be angry. Do they need to reflect? Yes, it’s called closure. In times of disasters, we all need closure.

America is a country with massive stores of weaponry. Texas alone has over 3.5 million guns. With so many pistols, rifles, automatic weapons and even mortars, we have to expect shootings. If we don’t find closure, all we’ll have is anger. That, unfortunately, will translate into more shootings. The only way out of this vicious cycle is to reflect. America needs more reflection.

I’m sure at this point, someone’s going to say: “Well, if these two lines aren’t brilliant, what’s your great idea?” Fair enough. If I don’t have something to contribute besides criticism, I should shut up, right?

Okay, here’s what I think the message should have been:

SOME STORIES
SHOULDN'T
STAY IN VEGAS.

THIS IS ONE OF
Llp

LET'S BE ANGRY. THEN LET'S HEAL.

#Vegassirony

If your hashtag is “#VegasStrong” shouldn’t your words be about strength? How do you gain strength? First, by being angry. Second, by healing. That’s how we get closure. That’s how we break the vicious cycle of killings.

I’m not saying this is the most brilliant ad in the world. I don’t even like the term “brilliant.” Very few things (if any) are brilliant anymore. Certainly not what R&R Partners did. And certainly not what I’m seeing from other advertisers.

The day we don’t understand is the day we should get out of the business.

“Crisis Advertising” should be a real thing. We have to understand what we’re saying and why we’re saying it. To simply put a message out there shows lack of thought and sensitivity. Good intentions only go so far. If you can’t approach these situations with true sincerity, then it’s wasted space.

We all know what space costs these days. Why waste it on lousy sentiment, particularly if the true intent of any advertising is to show we understand. The day we don’t understand is the day we should get out of the business.

Maybe we’re better off thinking brilliance is dead. It needs new birth and life. Sometimes things grow stronger that way. If it means a return to real brilliance (like the 60s), I think it’s worth killing brilliance as we know it now.

Let’s kill it and start again.

Robert Cormack is a freelance copywriter, novelist and blogger. He can be found at medium.com and beBee.com every week.


Comments

Robert Cormack

6 years ago #7

Thanks, @Dorothy Cooper.#7

Robert Cormack

6 years ago #6

Interesting perspective, . As I mentioned, I've got nothing against #VegasStrong, but I personally hate "chest thumping." It cheapens what I believe is the real human characteristic. By "healing" I mean we must be prepared to heal, so we break the cycle of anger, resentment and retaliation. I know it's the American way, but I'm more interested in people standing before a camera saying "We must heal." Maybe it's too much time spent reading Martin Luther King Jr. Reaction isn't as good—or as important—as reflection. Reaction starts wars, reflection starts mediation. I think the latter is better.#5

David B. Grinberg

6 years ago #5

First off, Robert, to answer your question in the headline: No, brilliance is NOT dead -- as you admirably demonstrate in this very blogging buzz. Second, I think "crisis advertising" already falls under the broad umbrella of "crisis communications." I defer to beBee's resident advertising expert Brand Ambassador Jim Murray for his thoughts on this issue. Personally, I like Vegas Strong (#VegasStrong) because it's short, simple and resonates. I think a good TV ad, IMHO, would show diverse people -- ranging from Vegas officials to those who survived injuries -- simply looking into the camera and saying for 2-seconds: "I'm Vegas Strong, how about you?" This humanizes the situation in a positive way. Have about 5-10 people do this individually and then as a group to end the ad. Use B-roll (background footage) of some tributes on the Strip to go along with it. Thoughts? This would be a good 30-second spot IHMO. Now, if I can only get paid for this free advice (lol)!

Robert Cormack

6 years ago #4

#2
Let's hope they do (heal), Lisa Vanderburg, but they might just go out and buy shells.

Robert Cormack

6 years ago #3

You may be right, @ZachariasVoulgaris. Someone sent a message to the guy who posted this "brilliant" ad, writing "goosebumps."#1

Lisa Vanderburg

6 years ago #2

Great piece Robert Cormack..I'd say 'brilliant'..... This is typical of the land of paradox, but young America is growing up the hard way; through violence, like her equals in the first world many times over. Trouble is, how to regain control of the mad-house? All that pioneering that ended up as gun-toting privilege is biting back. They 'toys' are in a populace of increasingly insecure folk, not responsible adults that view themselves and each other as 'good people,' their trust for their neighbor is tainted and the very values that made America great have been put into question since 9/11 (if not before). You're right; be angry, then heal!

Zacharias 🐝 Voulgaris

6 years ago #1

"Brilliant" is one of those words that's been used so much that it has lost it's meaning. It's like "awesome" which no longer has anything to do with awe. Besides, brilliance is fairly relative. Perhaps what's brilliant for the people that ad appeals to may be commonplace to everyone else. Also, there is nothing wrong with criticism. If everyone was PC all the time, then many people would get away with all sorts of BS, since no-one would be there to stop them before it is too late. For what it's worth, I think this attitude towards the BS people behind these ads is truly brilliant!

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